Most memorable birthday

 One of the most memorable birthday i have is when i celebrated my 7th birthday, i was really happy that time because my parents really prepared that birthday celebration for me. There’s so many visitors, some of them are my friends and i was really happy that day. I didn't expect it to be more fun and enjoyable because i thought it would be just a simple celebration, i received a lot of presents and greetings from my loved ones that made me more happier.


The birthday celebration turned out to be the day I didn't expected, there’s someone who greeted and sing a happy birthday for me. I was really thankful because my parents would be able throw a birthday party for me, they're really want me to be the happy and enjoy my day. Even though i was an only child, i didn't asked or expect that they’ll prepare such a celebration for me, but still they did. And that day was really the most memorable birthday party i have, i was able to enjoy and have fun, I’m really thankful because i’ve experienced such a thing like having a birthday celebration, it was really one of the most memorable event that happened in my life.

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  1. add more details: the setting of the narrative. how did you feel when you woke up that morning? did you know that there would be a celebration? who were there? what made you say that it wasn't something simple? how did you feel right after the celebration (during the celebration)?

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